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Love Never Lost

The patterns of my life Sifted through your heart. The calling of the wind Gives you a place to start. The crashing of the tide, The bubbles of the surf. The roughness of my fingers After time kissing with the earth. The golden ray of eyesight, And the shield black with pain. The rumble of the thunder Then its calming, soothing rain. The time you kissed my eyelids As night turned into day. The way that Hamlet felt When his Ophelia sank away. You taught my heart to sing, And my thoughts to find their place, Then you sang yourself to sleep Still creating time and space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 8/24/2011 11:14:00 PM
See what I mean, you never disappoint - you are a natural and I'm happy to post this as a fav.
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Date: 9/20/2009 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 7:20:00 PM
Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/19/2009 1:52:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a beautiful poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/19/2009 9:19:00 AM
Beautiful write here Windyann that reads with a sweet melody ... great selection to be featured this week at PoetrySoup. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/16/2009 5:15:00 AM
brilliant writing windyann ,impressive & toching ...Noura
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Date: 9/16/2009 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations, Windyann, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It charms the mind. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:55:00 AM
Windyann, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:38:00 PM
congrats on being a featured poet!!
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Windyann. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:29:00 PM
Windyann, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:15:00 PM
I think you have quatrains here with end rhyme on the 2nd & 4th lines? NICE imagery! Light & Love
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