Love, my Secluded Sedgeway

I pen this to you dear Love,
So my words remain eternal
Long after my heart is meld in dust

I am so thankful and ever so grateful
To you dear Love 
For finding me, my beloved 
And blessing me with your gifts

How could I have known what love is
Until you showed me
Made me feel your warmth 
Embraced your every detail
And succumbed to your wisdom

But certainly I do love you, 
With an awe inspiring light of dreams
And vague certainty of time
With all my essence and willow breath
Deep and irregular heart beats for you

Like a summer love bug strung on the taste of you
Pitching at every decibel, you are my sunshine 

Until I knew love
Finally, Until I was loved by you
Nothing became vivid 
Lucid became reality 

I want to search your vast mind and lay you down for eternity
Touching for as i do with you
That fragrance of a bed of roses always freshly cut with the morning dews

Love, that you love Love
Feeling it deep within me
Being unable to describe
Rewriting me
Embelishing me
 Deep,
Boisterous,
Love
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Agustin Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 10:04 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
Hlabisa Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Thanks so much Beata for the warm wishes. These aren't mu thoughts exactly. I try to create poems based on an idea and try get into character. Foe example, this is no way a depiction of my own life.
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