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Love Monster

You are the reason I'm alive The beauty to survive The air between the moments you arrived I longed for you to show me life You ripped my head until it stung Entire worlds of wrong Thank you monster For teaching me That love I sang is not for me I'm so happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/15/2017 7:52:00 PM
a very interesting one, Steve. I enjoyed the heartfelt nature of it.
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Steve Tomlin
Date: 4/15/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thanks. It's about recognising that love is about moderation with the things in my life i enjoy experiencing, not the deluded disney marriage of 24/7 and regular compromise.
Date: 4/14/2017 9:46:00 PM
Endure its course and made better no doubt. Nice piece...
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