Love Means Loyalty

Longer than twenty years it took me
Of steadfast faithful simplicity
Voicing reassurance, for her to truly get that I’m not you
Explains just how much you put her through.

Mister important ladies man, so dashing
Everyone else takes a back seat; hearts are for smashing
Another looker, another ********, another member of the ex-wife collection
Narcissism is a shameful condition, but you have zero
Shame, else you’d loathe yourself as I do, mister hero.

Love means loyalty, putting your loved ones first
Owning your impact, not rationalizing your thirsts
Your choices all--good, bad, and worst
And keeping your damned pants on when your
Lady is not around for you to ignore
Too late now, for the sake of your daughter’s heart
You’ll never fix it, but that’s no longer your part.

4/22/16
For Contest: Loyalty
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Warrior Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Excellent acrostic Tom...loyalty, the first thing we need from love...god bless and good luck...^WW^
Quigley Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, WW!
Callaghan Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 5:04 AM
A really great write.. too many out there who never consider the legacy of their actions. Good luck. Fiona
Quigley Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Thanks, Fiona!
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