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Love Me

Love me when you hear the lips parting the silence And the soul of the night is unraveling In the vapor of light I'm just a child who torments the dawn stretching My thoughts on the bleeding strings! Love me, Upon being hidden from the eternal with astonished steps Walking the shells under the eyelids. Trees that break their eyelashes. Giving into the shade. . . I'm nothing else than a grass stubble, White passions return to the panhandles of birds! Love me, We're close to the heaven: Me, you, the yellowish leaf, The deer, the desert licked up the warm windows.

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The Situation

Date: 7/26/2023 10:41:00 AM

I see this as the true womans response. The quiet resolve that every woman knows. Which is the reason I can never tell if I have a chance or not. It touches me being shy. But added with this explains why I've been single most of my life. Loosen up.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/26/2023 10:38:00 AM

You are truly outstanding with your use of poetic language. Nicely done. I'm sure poetry soup will fall in love with your poetry. You just have to become more interactive perhaps

Tom Woody
Date: 7/26/2023 10:43:00 AM

Your poetry needs to be read, but you will remain in relative obscurity unless you interact. It's just the way social media is (tit for tat). One way you can do it is by locating the new poems in the column on the left, read and comment. Also if you find a blog that interests you comment on that. Read and comment on poems by poets who read and comment on yours. Enter a few contests with themes that interest you. Above all, be sincere. Hope this helps!

Elena Mihalachi
Date: 7/26/2023 10:39:00 AM

I am new here, just about for 2 months. I will try to act more confident and get involved in Poetry souper's life :) Thank you ??