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Love Like Raindrops

Love, like raindrops falling down Embraced the dried barren earth Each drop a soothing caress That softens... and wins. All rights reserved----Cynthia Buhain-Baello---05.24.15 ---------------------- Dodoitsu - The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables, four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.

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Date: 5/30/2015 8:38:00 AM
that is lovely thanks for your knd comments on my poem God saves us, he has been doing so much in my life, ad its just lovely he thiongs I have experienced and een.
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 5/30/2015 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Diane Christian, God gave this gift of writing for a reason and we must use it to proclaim His Truth, His decrees, and His Love. That is the only way we give Him glory. ~~~~Cynthia
Date: 5/24/2015 2:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Great comparison of love and refreshing rain..Thanks for dropping by my page..Sara
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Sara Kendrick, enjoyed writing it too.
Date: 5/24/2015 7:18:00 AM
I loved your raindrop poem, especially your line, each drop a soothing caress. Sunday blessing to you. A 7. Darlene
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 5/24/2015 7:25:00 AM
Thank you dear Darlene Gifford. I like writing in short forms and this one was fun to do. Glad you liked it.~~~Cynthia
Date: 5/24/2015 7:08:00 AM
Exquisite word choice for this nice Sunday morning. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 5/24/2015 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Anna Hopper

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