Cynthia Buhain-Baello Poet Dodoitsu

Love Like Raindrops

Love, like raindrops falling down

Embraced the dried barren earth

Each drop a soothing caress

That softens... and wins.

All rights reserved----Cynthia Buhain-Baello---05.24.15


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Dodoitsu - The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin
and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables, four lines 
of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.

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Diane Christian May 30, 2015 at 8:38 AM that is lovely thanks for your knd comments on my poem God saves us, he has been doing so much in my life, ad its just lovely he thiongs I have experienced and een. Cynthia Buhain-Baello May 30, 2015 at 6:51 PM Thank you Diane Christian, God gave this gift of writing for a reason and we must use it to proclaim His Truth, His decrees, and His Love. That is the only way we give Him glory. ~~~~Cynthia

Sara Kendrick May 24, 2015 at 2:34 PM Enjoyed reading your work today..Great comparison of love and refreshing rain..Thanks for dropping by my page..Sara Cynthia Buhain-Baello May 24, 2015 at 7:05 PM Thank you Sara Kendrick, enjoyed writing it too.

Darlene Gifford May 24, 2015 at 7:18 AM I loved your raindrop poem, especially your line, each drop a soothing caress. Sunday blessing to you. A 7. Darlene Cynthia Buhain-Baello May 24, 2015 at 7:25 AM Thank you dear Darlene Gifford. I like writing in short forms and this one was fun to do. Glad you liked it.~~~Cynthia

Anna Hopper May 24, 2015 at 7:08 AM Exquisite word choice for this nice Sunday morning. Thanks for sharing! God bless! Cynthia Buhain-Baello May 24, 2015 at 7:15 AM Thank you Anna Hopper