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Love, Like a Rose

Love, Like a Rose… Love, like delicate petals of bud rose, Kiss me - wake me from my grey daydreaming Walk in first light where the sun transposes From moonlight’s silver shadows revealing. Love, like tender color of the rose, caress me, Brush away the thorns protecting my soft heart; Cast off your thorny sheath so I may see Blossoms open – ecstasy you impart. Love, like the fragile rose with fire, embrace me As your cherished prize winning bloom Trace your fingertips along my bursting seeds Rejoice - your plan born from your fertile womb. Love, like fragrance lingering in the rose, Leave your scent in a perfumed afterglow!

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Date: 12/30/2021 5:01:00 PM
A beautiful afterglow indeed! Very nice write Sam!!
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Date: 7/30/2021 8:36:00 PM
Very beautiful and creative write. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/30/2021 3:22:00 PM
Revisiting to congratulate for Brian's Sonnet Contest. A magical sonnet indeed! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 9/22/2020 1:53:00 PM
A delightful walk in first light with you. Love your comparison of love with a prize-winning rose and thorns with those things that prevent it. "Sun transposes from moonlight’s silver shadows" is a fave line. Pure beauty, my friend.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/22/2020 3:00:00 PM
Hi again! I hadn't written a poem on love or a rose in quite some time. The sonnet form just seemed to lend itself to these thoughts. Per usual, you got the underlying meaning with your always perceptive wisdom - signs from the dugout. Thank you dear friend! Blessings!
Date: 9/20/2020 6:00:00 AM
A wonderful write my friend! Fantastic job!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Mark! I so appreciate the time you took to read this poem and visit. Prayers and blessings!
Date: 9/19/2020 5:41:00 PM
Beautiful lyrical poem, Sam - an extra special Sonnet - extraordinary! Love all the beautiful lines, especially "Love, like the fragile rose with fire, embrace me As your cherished prize winning bloom " Congratulations, My Friend
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:36:00 AM
Hi Mala! This poem seemed to have a life of its own - just popped into bloom. I so appreciate your gracious message. Your words, as always, give me encouragement! Hugs and blessings my friend. Hope all is well!
Date: 9/17/2020 11:50:00 AM
Extraordinary imagery ...Enjoyed your romantic dinner dear Sam mam..So lovely rhythmic lines. Loved the ending lines very much..:-) Have a beautiful day..Much love:-)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hi Deepa! This poem is like a love song to me. When writing the lines just seemed to flow. So happy we could share the song! Sending you the best for your day. Hugs...
Date: 9/17/2020 10:21:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this! Congratulations Sam :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/20/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. So happy you enjoyed it. Grateful for your congratulations and message. Hugs and prayers!
Date: 9/17/2020 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2020 4:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and your visit. Nice to meet you.
Date: 9/17/2020 5:13:00 AM
Gorgeous write about romance and intimacy - just love the imagery and phrasing, my friend, and an exquisite rhythm underneath - this is headed to my faves promptly. Blessings, Brother! :o)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:48:00 AM
Gregory, you honor me with your fave. I am deeply grateful! This poem almost felt like writing a song. I so appreciate your feedback - especially one songwriter and poet to another. Hope you are well. Sending you many blessings!
Date: 9/16/2020 2:45:00 PM
lined gliding to a stairway of romance... superbly done, sam...huggs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Nette! Haven't written a love themed poem in some time. This was a fun journey into romance. Hope you are doing well. hugs and prayers...
Date: 9/16/2020 5:41:00 AM
- Really beautiful, Sam :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Blessings!
Date: 9/15/2020 10:01:00 PM
A fragrant love poem, Sam, nice write:)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/17/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Jo. I so appreciate your encouraging message and visit. Warmest regards

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