Love, Like a Rose

Love, Like a Rose…

Love, like delicate petals of bud rose,
Kiss me - wake me from my grey daydreaming
Walk in first light where the sun transposes
From moonlight’s silver shadows revealing.

Love, like tender color of the rose, caress me,
Brush away the thorns protecting my soft heart;
Cast off your thorny sheath so I may see
Blossoms open – ecstasy you impart.

Love, like the fragile rose with fire, embrace me
As your cherished prize winning bloom
Trace your fingertips along my bursting seeds
Rejoice - your plan born from your fertile womb.

Love, like fragrance lingering in the rose,
Leave your scent in a perfumed afterglow!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Blodgett Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 5:01 PM
A beautiful afterglow indeed! Very nice write Sam!!
Alex Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Very beautiful and creative write. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Revisiting to congratulate for Brian's Sonnet Contest. A magical sonnet indeed! Love ~ Mala
Watt Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 1:53 PM
A delightful walk in first light with you. Love your comparison of love with a prize-winning rose and thorns with those things that prevent it. "Sun transposes from moonlight’s silver shadows" is a fave line. Pure beauty, my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Hi again! I hadn't written a poem on love or a rose in quite some time. The sonnet form just seemed to lend itself to these thoughts. Per usual, you got the underlying meaning with your always perceptive wisdom - signs from the dugout. Thank you dear friend! Blessings!
Koplin Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 6:00 AM
A wonderful write my friend! Fantastic job!
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:33 AM
Thank you Mark! I so appreciate the time you took to read this poem and visit. Prayers and blessings!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 5:41 PM
Beautiful lyrical poem, Sam - an extra special Sonnet - extraordinary! Love all the beautiful lines, especially "Love, like the fragile rose with fire, embrace me As your cherished prize winning bloom " Congratulations, My Friend
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Hi Mala! This poem seemed to have a life of its own - just popped into bloom. I so appreciate your gracious message. Your words, as always, give me encouragement! Hugs and blessings my friend. Hope all is well!
Deepa Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Extraordinary imagery ...Enjoyed your romantic dinner dear Sam mam..So lovely rhythmic lines. Loved the ending lines very much..:-) Have a beautiful day..Much love:-)
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Hi Deepa! This poem is like a love song to me. When writing the lines just seemed to flow. So happy we could share the song! Sending you the best for your day. Hugs...
Sands Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 10:21 AM
This is a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this! Congratulations Sam :)
Kauffman Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 10:07 AM
Thank you Heidi. So happy you enjoyed it. Grateful for your congratulations and message. Hugs and prayers!
Zahid Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on your win
Kauffman Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and your visit. Nice to meet you.
Barden Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Gorgeous write about romance and intimacy - just love the imagery and phrasing, my friend, and an exquisite rhythm underneath - this is headed to my faves promptly. Blessings, Brother! :o)
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Gregory, you honor me with your fave. I am deeply grateful! This poem almost felt like writing a song. I so appreciate your feedback - especially one songwriter and poet to another. Hope you are well. Sending you many blessings!
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 2:45 PM
lined gliding to a stairway of romance... superbly done, sam...huggs
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Nette! Haven't written a love themed poem in some time. This was a fun journey into romance. Hope you are doing well. hugs and prayers...
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 5:41 AM
- Really beautiful, Sam :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Thank you my friend. Blessings!
Daniel Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 10:01 PM
A fragrant love poem, Sam, nice write:)
Kauffman Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 4:08 PM
Thank you so much Jo. I so appreciate your encouraging message and visit. Warmest regards
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