Love Like a Feather

The cries devastating our lives.
I wanted to hold onto you,
Forever always two.
As though nothing to ever lose,
I never thought I'd have to choose.
My heart upon your hands,
Never slipping through the strands.
The love was everlasting,
Always described as flabbergasting.
You were once my muse,
Till fate covered the fuse.
I sit and wait,
Wondering how long I had to stare straight.
My love for you still rises,
Across the lifeless horizon.
My bones still held together,
Till I loose that hope of forever.
The bonds once clever,
Our love once like a feather,
It could never be replaced.
No matter the amounts of lives is traced.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kearley Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 7:14 PM
:o)
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February 4, 2012 at 12:51 PM
Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it, especially the verse Myl love for you still rises, Across the lifeless horizon.
Daniels Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 3:33 PM
Thankyou(: & That was my favorite part also<3
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