Love Like a Candle

My love for you is like a candle 
                             The wick spills tears of joy for you 
                             Helping me through the darkness 
                             The light of your eyes shine on
                             Every time you flicker it’s like magic
                             Love and devotion carried me through 
                             You are sweet as  a red rose
                             With kisses and hugs I feel alive
                             Your heart pressing against mine
                              I am over the moon when you are with me
                              I cherish every moment we’re together ,
                              forever yours until the end of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 9:58 PM
NICOLAS, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 15, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Skat it was pleasure and thank you in return
A   Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 6:06 PM
nicolas, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
Crowley Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Lindas thank you
Tsiluma Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 12:25 AM
Lovely love poem Nicolas! Love the descriptions and the imagery of the candle and what it implies 'until the end of time'. Nice!
Crowley Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Thank you Vicky
Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:11 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Nicolas. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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April 15, 2021 at 10:16 AM
It was my pleasure and thank you as well Carol
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