Love Lifts

cotton candy kiss
delicious dessert from lips
broken heart finds lift
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Tor Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 4:56 PM
When heartbroken candy helps deal with the heartfelt pain. Nicely written Dear Karen...
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thanks
Greenhough Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 3:40 PM
I enjoy this very sweet senryu.
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 3:55 PM
So glad you enjoyed it!
Wolf Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 8:16 PM
Sweet and sincere - light as a feather. Great senryu, Karen.
Jones Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Thank you dear Gershon!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 9:17 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Love Lifts" write. Cotton Candy can make anything good even a broken heart... Have a fun time writing away.....................
Jones Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Paula!
Empress Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 3:41 AM
I love the cadence of your senryu! And i especially love the lines “ Cotton candy k i s s “ and the last line! So well written! And expressed in few syllables dear karen! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
Jones Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 5:20 AM
You are kind! I really improve due to you and other poets like Lin and Jan critiquing me and encouraging me therefore empowering me. Thank you! Occasionally I forget rules of form but I just corrected.
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