Love Lifts

cotton candy kiss delicious dessert from lips broken heart finds lift

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Michael Tor

Date: 3/7/2025 4:56:00 PM

When heartbroken candy helps deal with the heartfelt pain. Nicely written Dear Karen...

Karen Jones
Date: 3/7/2025 5:00:00 PM

Thanks

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/26/2025 3:40:00 PM

I enjoy this very sweet senryu.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/26/2025 3:55:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed it!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2025 8:16:00 PM

Sweet and sincere - light as a feather. Great senryu, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 8:38:00 PM

Thank you dear Gershon!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2025 9:17:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Love Lifts" write. Cotton Candy can make anything good even a broken heart... Have a fun time writing away.....................

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 11:11:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Paula!

Tom Woody

Date: 2/25/2025 6:55:00 AM

Mmm... Nothing like a yummy kiss. Agreed

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 7:24:00 AM

Hugs Tom!

Ink Empress

Date: 2/25/2025 3:41:00 AM

I love the cadence of your senryu! And i especially love the lines “ Cotton candy k i s s “ and the last line! So well written! And expressed in few syllables dear karen! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 5:20:00 AM

You are kind! I really improve due to you and other poets like Lin and Jan critiquing me and encouraging me therefore empowering me. Thank you! Occasionally I forget rules of form but I just corrected.