Love: "life, Birds, Bees and Trees"

LOVE:
“Life, Birds, Bees and Trees”

The beauty is nature in birds and the bees,
Hidden life within the hives and the trees,
Exact and complete, as nature doeth please.
 
Birds and bees are of life’s essence to please,
In most unique ways, nature take her ease,
Riding air currents, and nesting in trees,
Dawn of life’s freedoms still rustles in leaves,
Steadfast freedoms of God’s faith believes.

As we stand, in nature’s plan, in awe of bees,
Now of the bee’s honey how nature doeth please,
Dawn of life‘s freedom, still rustles in tree leaves.

The last shall become first, but shan’t be the least,
Hail!  “All good in nature comes from the east,
Enjoy, don't destroy, our nature's beast!”

Bees and birds of nature, beauty and sweet honey, 
Efficient to please, but man loves his money,
Employ not money, but Love life’s honey,
Sweet nature love makes honey, man makes money.

For Contest: The Birds and The Bees
In Honor of: Carol Brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/10/2010 8:53:00 AM
Super dandy congratulations on your win in my contest John. I am so happy you entered my contest with this truly awesome poem. New contest coming soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:33:00 AM
Excellent work, John. Congratulation on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn (That last line is outstanding!)
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win in Carol's contest with this gem John.. :) Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:27:00 AM
great rhyming acrostic! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:17:00 PM
Your poem is a true honor for a great poet like Carol. Many congratulations on this win. And thanks for the comments.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:24:00 PM
Cute cute cute, john. A big congrats to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:43:00 PM
Fne writing John. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:37:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your entry being in the winner's circle. Wonderful Poem! "Bees and birds of nature, beauty and sweet honey, Efficient to please, but man loves his money,Employ not money, but Love life’s honey, Sweet nature love makes honey, man makes money." Your last stanza really ties it up.
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:40:00 PM
wonderful , congrats on your win
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:37:00 PM
The poem has a very good beginning with the conceived theme. Congratulation, Moses dear, for the fourth place win,
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congrats Moses on a super win in Carol's great contest ... a stupendous write and wonderful victory tonight for u my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:49:00 AM
Well written poetry John with this difficult form.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:53:00 PM
Very well put as usual John. A very good poem to read this Sunday eve. Bless, Charles
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:27:00 AM
this is sure to be in the winners circle and should be in a book outstanding write my friend one could take a lesson even from this too thanks for sharing and for your kind comment keep up the wonderful writing
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:20:00 PM
This is really nice, John, I bet you will do well in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:48:00 PM
Excellent Moses and luv your rhyme scheme for each verse ..so powerful when reading..good luck in Carol's contest.. this one is delightful and shouts WINNER all the way.my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:09:00 PM
The last quatrain sums up your thoughts on nature very well, John
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:48:00 PM
You are kind! I know what my problem is now though...I read the capricorn info. and it nailed me...I am always seeking to improve myself.
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:07:00 PM
great job!! you got it just right on! thanks for reading my junk compared to yours. ;)
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:35:00 PM
Sweet John, you can give spiritual interpretations on almost any topic. I love the line "Enjoy and employ nature, do not destroy!" It's a lesson we need to learn. And the last line gave me a hearty laugh! Best wishes in Carol's contest. So nice to see you posting again and I'm glad your modem is repaired. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:04:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Great idea to pen...Sara
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