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   apollo

Love Letter Ii

From the rhapsody  of  your mythic lyre
to the haunting verses written on flame,
I shall but remember our dusking trysts
as nightfall slips, then, we are done…again.
How the lamentation of our  breath 
is  once more ever held in, held out
when daybreak calls for your rays’ gleam:

Somehow  the notes in poetry leave me
with an elixir of both joy and anguish,
the accompaniment of your tune upon my bosom
endures  the distance, far     farther on,
as your sparkle drapes this rosette curve
in such transient but intimate way—

Apollo,  ardent god of my sun, my morning dew
come for me without interludes of time;
play the  rhythm, its fervor eternal
knowing how mortal love can prevail
so long as we, in the same drift grows...unless


Love Letter Contest for Viv Wigley
Apollo: Greek God of the sun, music, poetry
Symbols: lyre, wreath
3/28/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:35 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Nette - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
Talbot Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 8:22 AM
A winner for me Nette, congratulations on your placement... Mick
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 2:08 AM
Congratulations on this well written winning poem Nette. Splendid! : )
Gentry Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:05 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Beautifully written, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette. Very well presented.
Carmack Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:31 PM
Glad to see one of my favorite writers on the winner's list.
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:22 PM
Beautiful poem, Nette...Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Congrats on your top win, nette. Well penned,
Cunningham Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations Nette. Tom
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:27 PM
A beautiful poem Nette, many congrats on win -) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Lovely, nette, you are consistently an enjoyable read. Congrats, Viv x
Malik Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Romantic mythology <3
Godwin Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Applause! Need I make more noise? Still applauding and leaving, applauding! Hugs ... CayCay
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 2:40 PM
- A beautiful love letter ... the God of the sun :) - Luck in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Beautiful poem..
Parker Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:44 PM
seems we both chose Gods, but I think yours is a better poem...good luck nette
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:23 PM
A masterpiece Nette, I have to fave this, as you may know I am a big fan of Apollo;-)
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Your letter expresses yearning for love..in well articulated words of longing..beautifully rendered..best for a win, nette.
Sands Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:27 PM
This is a beautiful, flowing poem Nette. I enjoyed it :) Good luck in the contest.
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