Love Letter From the Soul Xxiv

My Gift, “The pure present is an ungraspable advance of the past devouring the future. In truth, all sensation is already memory.” - Henri Bergson I feel, I felt tingles in the far recesses of my soul swirling in an ever circular motion surrounding the pounding of my heart resounding inside and out my echo chamber I find comfort in that peace your stillness, the silence all I am hearing is love bleeding slowly into me transmitting signals rushing alongside clear blue waters swimming up into my substanance my existence filtering in thru the green of those auspicious duck pond eyes your gift warms me each syllable entrusted as life lies naked at our door unabridged stories taking hold we walk away from the past and yesterday's wars
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Date: 12/18/2019 5:52:00 PM
From the duck pond to the Ocean, cheerio yesterday's wars. x
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Date: 12/18/2019 6:22:00 PM
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Date: 12/18/2019 5:52:00 PM
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Date: 12/18/2019 4:45:00 PM
Great lines, Tim, especially liked the first verse. I agree with the quote, "all sensation is already a memory."
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Date: 12/18/2019 6:21:00 PM
Thanks Lin
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