Ts Poetry Poet Romanticism

Love Letter From the Soul Iii

My Dearest Brava,


On Q I'm awakened by the boom
sounds of thunder in my soul
lightning striking fire

I'm burning up 
and the day is yet to wonder

the lark consumed 
cats eyes, shined
walking fence posts after dark
twinkles amongst stars


it's three and I only feel one
an enigma 

but that's not truth
and we only live on truth
stale bread and holy water
stolen from the catacombs
but we're not going to hell

we're already in paradise

I followed you til you stopped
and shook my rust

dancing a tango to Lima
humming a sultry Sierra tune
twirled about in Paris
making  love
and more than that tower swoon


bare in a blink of an eye
awaiting
not letting trouble walk on by

be that one, 
shoot across my sky

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Andrea Dietrich December 15, 2019 at 5:43 PM Love that end line, shoot across my sky. So COOL. Yep, I need to get through all this group of romantic poetry. But in time I will achieve that! Ts Poetry December 15, 2019 at 6:05 PM Thanks Andrea

Richard Lamoureux December 10, 2019 at 1:06 PM Part three is even better than part two and that is not an easy thing to do. Bravo. Ts Poetry December 15, 2019 at 6:05 PM Thanks Rick

Constance La France November 24, 2019 at 6:15 AM TS, amazing write should do well in contest, and also checking to see if you have me blocked by a soup clitche ! Ts Poetry November 24, 2019 at 9:00 AM Not yet, thank you

Brenda Chiri November 24, 2019 at 3:16 AM Wow T amazing!;) Ts Poetry November 24, 2019 at 8:59 AM Thanks B

Na Na November 24, 2019 at 12:22 AM Hi Tim you have a great way with words. You have been blessed my friend. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving Ts Poetry November 24, 2019 at 8:59 AM Thanks G

Jenish Somadas November 24, 2019 at 12:08 AM ##I'm burning up and the day is yet to wonder## Beautiful lines.. Ts Poetry November 24, 2019 at 8:58 AM Thank you Jenish

Lady Labyrinth November 23, 2019 at 11:47 PM Ah, see, this is Poets and Muscians for you. This better be flaming Skyfall Chicago...x Q. Lady Labyrinth November 23, 2019 at 11:51 PM https://youtu.be/W539KqDR4k8 Ts Poetry November 23, 2019 at 11:51 PM I'm honored at the mention...no parachute needed Lady Labyrinth November 23, 2019 at 11:47 PM I can feel a John Donne coming on...