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Love Letter From the Soul Iii

My Dearest Brava, On Q I'm awakened by the boom sounds of thunder in my soul lightning striking fire I'm burning up and the day is yet to wonder the lark consumed cats eyes, shined walking fence posts after dark twinkles amongst stars it's three and I only feel one an enigma but that's not truth and we only live on truth stale bread and holy water stolen from the catacombs but we're not going to hell we're already in paradise I followed you til you stopped and shook my rust dancing a tango to Lima humming a sultry Sierra tune twirled about in Paris making love and more than that tower swoon bare in a blink of an eye awaiting not letting trouble walk on by be that one, shoot across my sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/15/2019 5:43:00 PM
Love that end line, shoot across my sky. So COOL. Yep, I need to get through all this group of romantic poetry. But in time I will achieve that!
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Ts Poetry
Date: 12/15/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 12/10/2019 1:06:00 PM
Part three is even better than part two and that is not an easy thing to do. Bravo.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 12/15/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Rick
Date: 11/24/2019 6:15:00 AM
TS, amazing write should do well in contest, and also checking to see if you have me blocked by a soup clitche !
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/24/2019 9:00:00 AM
Not yet, thank you
Date: 11/24/2019 3:16:00 AM
Wow T amazing!;)
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/24/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thanks B
Date: 11/24/2019 12:22:00 AM
Hi Tim you have a great way with words. You have been blessed my friend. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
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Date: 11/24/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thanks G
Date: 11/24/2019 12:08:00 AM
##I'm burning up and the day is yet to wonder## Beautiful lines..
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/24/2019 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Jenish
Date: 11/23/2019 11:47:00 PM
Ah, see, this is Poets and Muscians for you. This better be flaming Skyfall Chicago...x Q.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/23/2019 11:51:00 PM
https://youtu.be/W539KqDR4k8
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/23/2019 11:51:00 PM
I'm honored at the mention...no parachute needed
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/23/2019 11:47:00 PM
I can feel a John Donne coming on...

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