Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Love Letter

I'm in love with you, my jelly baby.
I think you love me too maybe.
You float my boat when I'm below.
Your multicolored stings on show.

I'm in love with you, my Lion's Mane.
I think you love me just the same.
You now have me so captivated,
I'm surprised we have not yet mated.

I'm in love with you and all at sea.
I wonder what you'll do with me.
I'm willing to swim into your embrace.
If I die, so be the case.

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Susan Ashley December 7, 2017 at 7:14 AM Jean, a fantastic, imaginative take on the contest prompt. Your creative write with splendid imagery captivated me. Congratulations on your win with this enchanting write. ~Susan Jean Murray December 7, 2017 at 7:58 AM Thank you Susan. Viv makes me laugh so much I try to reciprocate. But his latest on food has got me flummoxed.

Suzanne Delaney November 15, 2017 at 8:22 AM Excellent and your metaphor for blind love is brilliant. Congratulations to you Jean, hugs SuZ Jean Murray November 15, 2017 at 12:29 PM Hugs back Suzanne!

James Inman November 14, 2017 at 2:56 AM Now this is devotion Jean. Great write. James Inman November 17, 2017 at 5:26 AM So sorry, Jean. Jean Murray November 14, 2017 at 5:02 AM Thank you James. He's drifted off now I'm afraid.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 13, 2017 at 7:08 PM This is fabulous! Congratulations :) xomo! Jean Murray November 14, 2017 at 1:11 AM Thank you Maureen.

Jan Allison November 13, 2017 at 6:36 PM Dropping back to say congrats on your win Jean:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray November 14, 2017 at 1:11 AM Thank you Jan. If you look below, did I get the spelling right? I thought afterwards I may have put testicles instead!

Viv Wigley November 13, 2017 at 6:14 AM Come to your Portugese man o'war, about time I gave you what for :) . Love the poem, Jean, made me smile. Go raibh maith agat x Jean Murray November 13, 2017 at 8:12 AM Wrap your lovin' tenticles around me Viv. Thank you for the placement.

Jan Allison November 12, 2017 at 4:35 PM What a unique interpretation of the contest theme and written with your usual wit jean:-) We have had jellyfish washed up on our shores from the recent hurricane they aren't usually found here and are dangerous if they sting you so no skinny dipping in the sea jean: -( hugs jan xx Jean Murray November 12, 2017 at 4:56 PM Of course Jan. I only skinny dip when he's about...my jelly baby.

Jack Horne November 11, 2017 at 2:52 PM LOL, love this clever write Jean Murray November 11, 2017 at 3:00 PM You gotta laugh Jack.

Arthur Vaso November 10, 2017 at 10:12 PM I had no idea : ) ....it's wonderful Jean Jean Murray November 11, 2017 at 3:13 AM Yes Arthur....isn't love grand??

Lim'Rik Flats November 10, 2017 at 12:45 PM OH this is deeliciously fun! Watch out for leopardcons;-) Hugcycles ~ j Jean Murray November 10, 2017 at 1:57 PM Hi John! We had Lion's Mane jellyfish stranded on our beaches this past summer...most unusual that they should travel so far north.

Tim Smith November 10, 2017 at 11:07 AM I had no idea : ) ....it's wonderful Jean Jean Murray November 10, 2017 at 11:24 AM Yes Tim...isn't love grand??