Love Lesson

LOVE  LESSON


I give my  lesson for their son.
Room plain, cracked, greyed -
Rubbed away - curtains frayed.  
Good  furnishing  -  none,
Except the big photo  
Of two lovers  long  ago.

They  have  lost their charm.
She, dumpy  and  plainer,    
Holding  his  old arm.  
He, greying, opens doors for her.
She leans on  his strong  lift  
And walks in to see the gift -

Flowers -  rose  and  carnation -
A birthday surprise  celebration.   
“Please stay and share !”
No -  this is a private affaire,
In   a room near-finished
But with love furnished.

She gave me my lesson.
She’d  achieved my ambition.  
I,  to rich curtains returning, 
And   no husband  to  miss me.
Waiting with engine running,
My shiny car outside is empty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 26, 2010 at 5:02 AM
I like the modernistic edge, the post modern dramatic monologue ... a truly inspired write, and very good poem. Bravo, my friend
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