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love is lost in the eye of the storm

splash the foot is in the puddle the girl is leaving i am standing the storm swoosh the wind hits my face i take one more look at the love that is leaving me her tears are now in conglomeration with the rain I am speechless the time is the dark noon is dark heart is dark have you ever felt the life slipping out of your body the heat in your breast,constantly imploding? she has killed me they have all killed me for the last time I'll look for eden alone... it must be this way [splash]

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Date: 2/14/2009 4:47:00 PM
Kalonji, I did indeed feel the "life slipping out of my body" last month as I held my father's hand while he died. I hope we will both find joy in the future. Carolyn
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