Love Is Enough

Love Is Enough

He sits alone on the front porch; elbows on knees and head in hands
Not a soul around at this ungodly hour to see him cry
His shaky breath is painful as he struggles through constriction
"What else can I do to get ahead"

He steps softly through the house, peeking in upon his children
thankful for their smiles and joyous play
with a somber grin, he turns away into the kitchen where
scattered statements call him; "Am I good enough?"


6/26/2018
Contest: 8 lines of fate
Sponsor: Silent One

3rd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your words convey such a deep pain and hopelessness that is gripping. Well done! Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 10:59 PM
A poignant write, Jeffrey. Congrats on your win.
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. An interesting poem about fate. Some hear those words throughout their childhood and they become their fate if they cannot find help to change them. Negative thinking and fate. Thought-provoking poem.
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:38 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Jeffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Man Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Heartbreaking!
Spencer Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 4:50 AM
Thank you, Lyric. A FICTION truth! Kids are expensive, but you don't have to break the bank to give them everything! Jeffrey
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