Love Is Bubble Blind

I picked you up like a “shiny”…newly minted copper penny 
(How cliché)
it was your kitten fur voice  (O how you would hate that) 
the avocado texture 
with which …no matter what wild wicked hour I would call you...
you would answer
You shimmered like sunlight on the forest floor of my needles of neediness
glinted off the shiny chrome and twilight blinders of my made to order 
searing searcher’s soul 
You were the perfect portent…with your torrents of torment
to wash clean my jet and emerald caves 

Or was it you who found me? 

White gem silent…hidden behind my poetry in a seat in that Inn
I was listening to the hues of blues
stenciling the deep red shards of my heart on the unlined pages 
of a blank black journal
I wore cool light blue and soft sheet cotton…like a cloud kissed sky
I was... light as air and deep as the sea
You became my heroic touchstone…my one true thing sapphire sparked rock of glory
I hung you around my neck 
I yoked myself with the weight of you
I hung myself…faithfully to my “cross to bear” -your endless denial of our love

You were lithe…thin as a straw…tall as a poplar...white as ash and grey as coal except for the orange hot fire in the center ring
 …of your cigarette

I mistook it for the flames of our unearthly love

In truth...it was just the firmament of your eternal coolness reflecting back the stars 
of my own piercing need
so yoked by my own wanton weave …I drove on blindly
the ghost of your emotionless carcass still draped around my neck
“Leave no man behind”
I know you laughed and told them
that it was just a fire pit left in the cave  
by the Queens of the Stone Age 
(Some loud angry band you loved) 
less real (to you) 
but far more ethereal bubble dreamy and ever lost in time (to me) 
than the newly discovered “writing on the wall”
*POP*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Ingrid, Congratulations on your "Cliche" win. Love LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Congrats on ur very wonderful win with this amazing write Ingrid..
Showalter Swift Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you like it!
Davey Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Congrats on your well deserved placement in this contest!
Showalter Swift Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 9:33 AM
THANK YOU Brian!
Turner Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 5:38 PM
I really like this Ingrid. Shows vulnerability and the fact that yes be it cliche' Love truly is blind. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Peace my friend:)
Showalter Swift Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Tank you so much Daniel
A   Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:35 PM
soup Mail Ingrid.... make that double soup mail. LINDA
Showalter Swift Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Linda...I just "got it!" LOL I am slow sometimes
A   Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:36 PM
LOL,, I guess I am slow too... LOL... I was talking about the writing on the wall, not your poem. LOLOL.. But, i guess, I did give you a suggestion on your poem, through soup mail. Love LINDA
A   Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Ingrid, if only we could read the writing, awesome poem. LINDA
Showalter Swift Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Hi Linda I am EVER ready to take constructive crit! Please edit away! Or give me a clearer view of what is making it unreadable LOL and seriously :) Ing
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