Ralph Sergi Poet Tanka

Love Is Blind

Love is Blind -  Tanka

I’m close to you now
But I cannot see your face
Your touch excites me
Touch is a response to say 
My love is as blind as I

©Ralph Sergi 
September 14, 2017

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Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2017 at 6:23 PM Sweet romance!!! I enjoyed this one today.

Patricia Cresswell September 15, 2017 at 8:57 PM Love is always blind in the beginning but as it matures or we do it changes. It is not the eyes that play an important roll in loving it is the ears. I really appreciate hw your poems give me thought.

Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 1:05 PM A lovely romantic poem--love the two ending lines, Ralph! Ralph Sergi September 15, 2017 at 8:28 AM Thank you, Vijay/

Ralph Sergi September 14, 2017 at 10:58 AM Hi Buddy: At my age, If I get kissed or hugged by my neighbor, I will go into a fantasy mode!

Susan Ashley September 14, 2017 at 10:42 AM What a lovely and romantic poem this is Ralph. I truly enjoyed reading your write this morning! Ralph Sergi September 14, 2017 at 10:53 AM Hi Susan: Thank your the quick response, I'm honored. It was written by near a Coleman lamp during Irma!

Jan Allison September 14, 2017 at 10:40 AM beautiful tanka Ralph... they say love is blind... but the neighbour's aint lol:-0 hugs jan xx Ralph Sergi September 14, 2017 at 10:56 AM Thank you, Buddy: At my age if I get or kissed by my neighbor I will go in a fantasy mode!