Love Is An Action

Love is not a thing
To admire, or look at
If you keep peeling
As you do an onion
To undress or uncoat
To figure it out
You'll end up with nothing.
For love is an action
Evolving, growing
At every tender
Feeding, it's a feeling, so
Free yourself from your demands
And love, with no remand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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