Larry Bradfield Poet Rispetto

Love Is Actually Pathetic

Those who love know of the weakness in the knees
That comes from smiling eyes that have chosen you.
The shortness of breath when ones lover says, "please",
And the racing heart when one hears,"Yes, please do."
The world turns to chaos as time seems to freeze
And you look in the mirror and wonder "who".
Yes,love is pathetic, my friend, as you know -
It is for the young and we should keep it so!

7/29/2017
For contest Love Is Actually...by John Anderson

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Jan Allison July 30, 2017 at 1:54 PM the title is perfect Larry the final line made me smile and after 26 years of marriage i would say its for the young at heart not just they young lol:-) hugs jan xx Larry Bradfield July 30, 2017 at 2:35 PM You are so right, Jan...! I'm almost 80 and "I still got it"..LOL Thanks for the comment and the visit...Larry