Love Is Actually Humanity's Gift

Love is actually humanity's gift. It's what keeps our frail souls glued to existence. When life fractures us, it lets our pieces shift. All it wants in return is our persistence. It kisses its acceptance in our brain's rift. Truly, it's our only scrap of assistance. We forget to apply it when we are sore. If it's a present, then we should use it more. ~ Contest: Love is Actually ....... Sponsor: John Anderson Written On: July 28th, 2017 Won: 5th Place
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Ajmal Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, love is a really important part of our lives, everybody wants it and believe me our lives are incomplete without anyone loving you, a very beautiful write
Lorette Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:50 AM
I sincerely agree with what you have to say. Thank you for your lovely comment! :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:17 PM
All the more we say about love is not enough and your poem is so enlightening! Congrats on the high place. :) Sunita
Lorette Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:35 PM
Thank you for your comment, Sunita! :)
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations Alyssa, on your win with this lovely poem!
Lorette Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Susan! :)
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations on your win, Alyssa, tender and beautiful poem :) ~*
Lorette Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Thanks! :)
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Beautifully done my friend...a winner in my court...god bless...^WW^
Lorette Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, WW! :)
Downing  Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Oh I do love this, Alyssa. It's so beautifully true. I wish you good luck in the contest :)
Lorette Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Akkina! :)
Ashley Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Hi Alyssa, as always, I think your phrasings and textures are beautiful. Good luck in the contest! :)
Lorette Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Thanks, Susan! :)
Sands Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 5:03 PM
This is great Alyssa. Nice poem and I wish you luck in the contest :)
Lorette Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Thank you, Heidi! :)
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