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Love Is Actually God

Creation in bloom His eternal essence From the whom, Love a marvelous inception In a sonic boom, His omniscient presence As we consume His Love from births conception His Love in loom, a brilliant luminescence Angels groom in His Love, for our reception Let’s assume, that Love is God and God is all He will make room, with His Love in Heaven's ball. The form required is Rispetto, which is an Italian form of poetry with 8 lines, consisting of two rhymed quatrains, or an octave (8-line stanza), with a strict meter. There should be 11 syllables per line with the rhyming pattern of abababcc. Aug.07.2017 Love is Actually... Sponsored by: John Anderson

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Date: 8/21/2017 11:08:00 AM
I don't comprehend these different forms as yet...but I'm glad you explained it here...Rispetto... I enjoyed your poem today and as always, WW, I wish you a lovely day
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Date: 8/17/2017 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful use of the form,^WW^, luck in the contest..~*
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Date: 8/9/2017 5:22:00 AM
Really nice work here... I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 8/8/2017 12:23:00 PM
Wonderful work WW, best wishes...
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Date: 8/8/2017 6:11:00 AM
Well-penned.
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Date: 8/8/2017 2:18:00 AM
Hi WW , beautifully described write , God is pure love , ' Amen ' , good luck in the contest ::)))
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:59:00 PM
What a great poem... the rhyming is excellent... Beautiful...
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:31:00 PM
Wow WW, this just completely awesome! The end rhymes are amazing but the internal rhymes makes it magnificent! A fav for me! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:03:00 AM
Excellent...loving the internal rhyme
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:01:00 AM
what a soulful song made to keep me in tune with God's loving force...very fine, WW.. huggs
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:09:00 AM
Amazing rhyme, WW, you rock!
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:20:00 AM
This is a great poem for the contest WW. Beautifully written! :) I enjoyed this today.
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:10:00 AM
Good day WW. I enjoyed reading you today...
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:35:00 AM
I just love the line, "Let's assume, that Love is God and God is all," that infers that Love is everywhere as God is too! And I believe that too! What a magnificent write my friend! You have amazed me yet again with your skillful writing! I love the Rispetto form! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:22:00 AM
- Really beautiful written W.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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