Love Is Actually God

Creation in bloom His eternal essence
From the whom, Love a marvelous inception
In a sonic boom, His omniscient presence
As we consume His Love from births conception
His Love in loom, a brilliant luminescence
Angels groom in His Love, for our reception
Let’s assume, that Love is God and God is all
He will make room, with His Love in Heaven's ball.



 The form required is Rispetto,  which is an Italian form of poetry with 8 lines, consisting of two rhymed quatrains, or an octave (8-line stanza), with a strict meter. There should be 11 syllables per line with the rhyming pattern of abababcc.





Aug.07.2017
Love is Actually...
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Michael Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:08 AM
I don't comprehend these different forms as yet...but I'm glad you explained it here...Rispetto... I enjoyed your poem today and as always, WW, I wish you a lovely day
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Beautiful use of the form,^WW^, luck in the contest..~*
Teagan Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 5:22 AM
Really nice work here... I enjoyed reading this.
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Wonderful work WW, best wishes...
Kiser Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 6:11 AM
Well-penned.
Salehi Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:59 PM
What a great poem... the rhyming is excellent... Beautiful...
Ashley Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Wow WW, this just completely awesome! The end rhymes are amazing but the internal rhymes makes it magnificent! A fav for me! Good luck in the contest :)
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Excellent...loving the internal rhyme
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:01 AM
what a soulful song made to keep me in tune with God's loving force...very fine, WW.. huggs
Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Amazing rhyme, WW, you rock!
Sands Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:20 AM
This is a great poem for the contest WW. Beautifully written! :) I enjoyed this today.
Michael Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Good day WW. I enjoyed reading you today...
Sivey Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 4:35 AM
I just love the line, "Let's assume, that Love is God and God is all," that infers that Love is everywhere as God is too! And I believe that too! What a magnificent write my friend! You have amazed me yet again with your skillful writing! I love the Rispetto form! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 3:22 AM
- Really beautiful written W.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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