Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

Love Is a Beautiful Gift

Love is a beautiful gift....

When your lips touch on my lips, then I wake up
When your hair fall on my face, then I feel tickle
When your head on my chest, then I find peace
When your arms around me, then I promise my love
When your love fall on me then I take care of you
When your eyes close then I make you happy
When you carry my heart then I feel I am yours
When I carry your soul then I feel you are mine
When I write a poem then I think you are a poem
When you read my poem, then I feel your warm
When the world around me then I see no where
When you are around me then I am somewhere
When you are close to me then our love is melt
When you are far away then our love turns tears
Love gives me the best when I love you
and its a beautiful gift that never ends

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Sukmawati Komala May 5, 2013 at 1:56 AM Amazing sharing dear friend poet Ravi... so enjoyed.. thank you for your dropping by <3 :)

Lucilla Carrillo May 2, 2013 at 3:39 PM I agree with you. It is a gift. something that you can not buy. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Laura Breidenthal April 30, 2013 at 3:18 AM That it is, my friend. It is clear you know some things about love. Cherish that gift forevermore! As if i NEED to say ity, right? Nice poem! I enjoyed reading it a lot. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2013 at 4:48 PM Oh, I really like this kind of poem. It's a style I once taught to some students of mine: to being each line the same.we had been learning about spring and they wrote poems in which each line began In spring. ..... Very lovely. Ravi Sathasivam April 30, 2013 at 12:08 AM Thanks for your comment

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2013 at 7:51 AM Very expressive work that some lovely lady enjoyed reading I am sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Ravi Sathasivam April 30, 2013 at 12:08 AM Thanks for your comment Ravi Sathasivam April 30, 2013 at 12:08 AM Thanks for your comment

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2013 at 3:27 AM Yes .... this is the Ravi I "know" ..... full of delightful and loving words! (I was a little worried at the first one you posted) - This is really beautifully Ravi!! - Wishing you all the best, have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam April 30, 2013 at 12:08 AM Thanks for your comment Ravi Sathasivam April 24, 2013 at 4:53 AM Thanks Anne. Appreciated.