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Love Is a Battlefield

A thought born from rage, 
A decision made in haste. 
An action performed out of anger 
As a precious heart’s laid to waste 

Trembling lips blow out smoke 
From the fatal shot of words spoken, 
As the sanctity of ones promise 
Is left shattered and broken 
 
A soul stained with blood 
From that murderous shot, 
As the words enter the heart 
Painful and red hot 

A grieving face wet with tears 
And the others eyes filled with shame, 
As misguided emotions 
Were most likely to blame

Jealousy, mistrust, 
Insecurity and greed 
From their tight grip 
Some can never be freed 

This emotional war we fight 
Is brutal and tough, 
But as hard as some fight 
It is never enough 

So what’s left are the victims 
Of this senseless war, 
Leaving the survivors bloodied and broken 
And empty to the core 

Words and emotions 
Are powerful weapons and tools, 
So make sure you don’t leave them 
in the hands of loves fools

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/23/2014 8:29:00 AM
very well said my friend. Death and life are in the power of the tongue... Pr. 18:21 so the question we all should ask our self is do we want to speak life or death into someone? Life flows through you my friend!
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Date: 1/20/2014 6:16:00 PM
Wow. This is fantastic. You conveyed everything you're feeling perfectly. Great job
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Thomas King
Date: 1/20/2014 7:11:00 PM
Thank you fellow poet for taking the time to read and comment, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Date: 1/20/2014 6:07:00 PM
Well written tight poem exploring the wounds one can inflict on another
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Thomas King
Date: 1/20/2014 7:13:00 PM
Appreciate the kind words and thanks for the read, it means a lot.....

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