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Love Is

Love is a million butterflies tickling your stomach and one thousand smiles upon your face. Inspired by Silent One's One liner contest (not for the contest)

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2016 6:12:00 PM

It is most contest worthy. To me, it captures the feel of infatuation, the initial attraction. Falling in love with my Tim did indeed begin with butterflies, but they can turn into 'dragon' flies! My tummy and smile still ignite when he comes home from work. I really like this even if the Libra in me seems to be debating it! ... CayCay

Chris Hagy

Date: 10/10/2016 7:09:00 PM

I agree with Charlie, this would be a beautiful entry...nice write:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/9/2016 7:34:00 AM

You should enter this one Charmaine...

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2016 6:26:00 AM

Oh! This is so cute, Charm! I think it mainly applies to young love! When much older, love can cause pain and worries, especially where our children are concerned. ~ Regards // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2016 2:53:00 PM

The smiles are the icing on the cake.

Paloma P

Date: 10/8/2016 2:01:00 PM

Oh a million butterflies, so fine! :)

Shirley Long

Date: 10/8/2016 1:54:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem today.