Love In the Snow

when true love bonding
upon a virgin carpet 
crystal flakes entwine
mingle within golden hair
the glow of two lovers melt

© Harry J Horsman  2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 1:12 AM
I can feel the romantic heat! Love it, Harry; and rate it a solid "7!" Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:45 PM
This is amazing Harry. I am sure Andrea will appreciate it too! 7
Neels Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Love this Harry ;) how are you doing? Hope the weekend has been good..
Hamilton Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 5:21 PM
sensually seductive poem Harry great pen hugs 7
Anderson-Throop Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 4:40 PM
Harry. Lovely poem...Haven't heard from you for ages...hope all is well...Victoria
Pinet Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the beauty of you words and we fall prey to their magic. Emile.
Mason Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:43 AM
great imagery Harry. warm thoughts, Ralph
Nance Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Nice! Your poetry glows with this one, enjoyed! :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Way to go with this passionate winning work!! Congrats!!Sara
A  Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Hi Harry, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Harry, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:19 AM
Love it. xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Beautiful, detailed image of romance, Harry...congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Harry:-) Hugs Jan xx
Sirak Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 7:32 AM
Lovely! The glow of love warms us even when the world around us is cold.
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations Harry..love
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 12:01 AM
Oh, how nice to see you entered my contest, Harry. Your imagery was so lovely. Congratulations, my friend. And again, for all the help you gave me recently!
Kapoor Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Excellent dear friend. You always amaze us by the depths of your beautiful writes. The last lines "the glow of two lovers melt" is too good. Thanks Harry for your kind words on my Blog. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Austin Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Cold but very warm, Harry. I love tanka because the skiy's the limit for imagination. Love, daver
Devnath  Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Two in one. Extreme beauty in love just adorned with nice natural colors having superb visions in to it. Always genius, you are my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 5:49 AM
I hope that this goes well in the contest, for I reckon the visuals are splendid.
Nance Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Ohh this is romantic with a hint of naughty. nicely done.
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:14 AM
Such a beautiful tanka Harry - I've not even see the contest yet lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 5:18 AM
- Beautiful love in white snow, Harry - Luck in contest ! - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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