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Love In the Snow

when true love bonding
upon a virgin carpet 
crystal flakes entwine
mingle within golden hair
the glow of two lovers melt

© Harry J Horsman  2013

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/29/2015 1:12:00 AM

I can feel the romantic heat! Love it, Harry; and rate it a solid "7!" Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/27/2015 4:45:00 PM

This is amazing Harry. I am sure Andrea will appreciate it too! 7

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/19/2015 10:47:00 AM

Love this Harry ;) how are you doing? Hope the weekend has been good..

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/14/2015 5:21:00 PM

sensually seductive poem Harry great pen hugs 7

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 4/1/2015 4:40:00 PM

Harry. Lovely poem...Haven't heard from you for ages...hope all is well...Victoria

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/29/2015 7:18:00 PM

Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the beauty of you words and we fall prey to their magic. Emile.

Ralph Mason

Date: 3/16/2015 8:43:00 AM

great imagery Harry. warm thoughts, Ralph

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:48:00 PM

Nice! Your poetry glows with this one, enjoyed! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 1:34:00 PM

Way to go with this passionate winning work!! Congrats!!Sara

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:14:00 PM

Hi Harry, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:59:00 AM

Harry, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/8/2015 6:19:00 AM

Love it. xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/7/2015 8:02:00 PM

Beautiful, detailed image of romance, Harry...congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:00:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Harry:-) Hugs Jan xx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/7/2015 7:32:00 AM

Lovely! The glow of love warms us even when the world around us is cold.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 6:14:00 AM

Congratulations Harry..love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:01:00 AM

Oh, how nice to see you entered my contest, Harry. Your imagery was so lovely. Congratulations, my friend. And again, for all the help you gave me recently!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/6/2015 2:36:00 AM

Excellent dear friend. You always amaze us by the depths of your beautiful writes. The last lines "the glow of two lovers melt" is too good. Thanks Harry for your kind words on my Blog. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Daver Austin

Date: 3/4/2015 10:50:00 AM

Cold but very warm, Harry. I love tanka because the skiy's the limit for imagination. Love, daver

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/3/2015 8:25:00 AM

Two in one. Extreme beauty in love just adorned with nice natural colors having superb visions in to it. Always genius, you are my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl