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Love In the Rain

Love was deep as the eyes We heard the pulse that sighs And kissed with hearts that yearn From flames in veins that burn To hold this love so tight Neath' stars that glowed soft bright As clouds of rain moved slow We felt its warm winds blow Lids of our eyes did close With breath from scent of rose That laid soft in your hand Then dropped free to the land Time's hours of glass did tell When grain by grain they fell Till' dawn took day from night And sun rose far too height The black of night turned gray Was torched to ash from day To love through night love's gain We sealed our love in rain 2/6/18 contest 120 words

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Date: 2/14/2018 4:33:00 PM
How was that kiss though, lol. Great job, Frederic.
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Frederic! A lovely, romantic write so well constructed within the confines of the syllable count. Very nicely done :) ~judy
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Frederic, fantastic write.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:58:00 AM
Lovely work Frederic, congratulations...
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:30:00 PM
Ahh a senual beauty you have here dear Frederic :)
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Date: 2/10/2018 2:38:00 PM
- Congratulations on this wonderful poem, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:35:00 AM
Congrats on your great winner, Frederic.
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:03:00 AM
Hi Frederic, I really enjoyed this lovely write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/10/2018 8:52:00 AM
Now that sounds like love Frederic, congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/10/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thank you SO, it was an interesting contest
Date: 2/8/2018 7:47:00 PM
A lushly romantic poem Frederick with passionate imagery of love 'From flames in veins that burn' - that's some beautiful love my friend - an enthralling write! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:05:00 PM
very well written. I am feeling more impressed by the six word liners!! They allowed us more freedom with rhythm and rhyme!
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Date: 2/7/2018 6:06:00 PM
Hi Frederic, This is so well written and very romantic . The content, imagery and rhymes are delightful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:33:00 PM
Whether a memory or a dream this poem is the cream! :D
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