Love In the Park

Twas love in the park every single day Her name was Elizabeth, she sure liked to play An Aussie so sweet After lunch, we'd eat! To again feel the thrill of love's sweet ballet!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 5, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Our brains and bods//are much at odds// Bods will pursue//Any buck or ewe//Brains may yell, "Ye Gods!" GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!! (actually had this one sitting in the hopper — I consider it one of my best "Jack Ellison" impressions;-)
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October 5, 2017 at 8:58 AM
This is the result of a request from Oh Silent One! WOW! Am I that famous that you're doing impressions of me... but I AM famous in my own mind! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!
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October 5, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Hey you did it! A love limerick! You are truly the king!
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October 5, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Those were the days, my friends... thought they'd never end! Now see what you started!!! King Jackson
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