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Love In the Night

In the dark of night, under the stars My lover is nestled in my arms. Breathing softly, our fingers entwine- I feel his love; he feels mine. In the dark of night under silvery moon He wants to take me—I'll let him soon. Fingers like velvet touch my skin: This feels like heaven or glorious sin. In the dark of night, dawn drawing nigh I rest on his heart, and softly sigh. Our bodies spent with sated love, We blissfully dream with the stars above. D H Loewen Copyright November 17, 2009 All rights reserved

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Date: 4/24/2018 1:03:00 PM
Simply put but very effective being stuck in any bubble has its challenges without adding any stimulants to sort out what may elude us on any given day. good job
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Date: 4/24/2018 11:18:00 AM
I like your imaginary words you use to describe your love and the rhymes that bring it all together to resonate with your readers. Nicely done.
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David Loewen
Date: 4/24/2018 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Jack. I generally write what I feel, and rhyming has always been my strong suit.

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