Love In the First Sight

As I wrote my poem throughout the day,
I saw a Beautiful girl there reading
I walked up to her so i can say hey,
She looks up and now i have this feeling.

Her voice is so sweet and her eyes are blue,
And she has a dark brown curly hair style.
She said"Hello" and then " Nice to meet you",
But then i got lost when she did that smile.

We talk and talk until the sun goes down,
And stared at the sky as the stars comes up.
She holds my hand as she started to frown,
And that's how i know when my time is up

But the love story will never end here,
Because what you feel will never disappear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 11:55 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Duncan Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 3:32 PM
nice sonnet :) love never ends.
Mupakamiso  Avatar
June 16, 2017 at 8:29 PM
good write... l like it
White Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 3:29 AM
Lovely sonnet. Love lingers longer than that one meeting, doesn't it. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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