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Deprived of Your Love

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Contest by Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Tingling passion arose as you came close. Romance rolled to tell ‘we would not stay apart.’ Unfolding your wish you dared to propose. Emotion was entwined from you to my heart. Territory of love was built in vain. Coward in guise of lover came and relation coiled. Love terminated in piercing pain. Engaged once I was devoted, but destiny spoiled. Love not reciprocated always soft and shy being devoid of demand and passion hidden sad sullen in solitary soul. It is gaze of sunflower on silent adoration to blazing dazzling Sun. It is nectar secretion of oyster to form pearl of pain Beautiful coral garden under ocean beyond human view. No expectation to be loved but to grow in the abyss of dismal. Still a feeble faint hope for far future fascinating a miracle marveling to achieve sudden response ending in unison.

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Date: 12/14/2017 9:14:00 PM
Beautiful! I stumbled on this piece while doing my high school homework. The meaning fits in with my life right now...
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 10/29/2017 2:43:00 PM
This is a sad love poem...
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:10:00 PM
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