Jenish Somadas Poet Jueju

Love In Dark Woods

Grape vine held out her soft hands
Red pine bow down then hold hands
Will they care not my shy look?
Love in dark woods that thrive lands.



Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE K,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Janice Canerdy March 25, 2020 at 12:53 AM Awesome, Jenish. Janice Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 1:02 AM Thank you Janice..

Pandita Sietesantos March 22, 2020 at 5:44 PM Lovely, romantic piece with beautiful imagery - enjoyed the read! Best regards. Pandita Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 12:21 AM Thank you Pandita for your kind words..

Harry Horsman March 22, 2020 at 2:17 AM Love where you go with this gem of poetry.. Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 12:20 AM Thank you Harry for that delightful comment..

Eve Roper March 22, 2020 at 12:46 AM What a great way to describe the growth of a climbing vine. Should place very high in the contest, if for the contest. Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 12:19 AM It is not for the contest Eve.. In fact the Jueju contest is mine.. Thank you for your kind words..

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2020 at 6:54 PM Some pretty images, Jenish! Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 12:18 AM Thank you Kim..

Sam Kauffman March 20, 2020 at 12:27 AM Fragile love - so tender. Congratulations Jenish. Jenish Somadas March 25, 2020 at 12:17 AM Thank you Sam...

Caren Krutsinger March 19, 2020 at 8:57 PM Delicate and pretty. Jenish Somadas March 20, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Caren..

Ann Foster March 19, 2020 at 7:06 PM I felt very far away... like in the forest where the spider dwell and the hobbit tries to get passed. To fun. Great write. Ann Jenish Somadas March 20, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Ann.. Forests are safer at present..

Demetrios Trifiatis March 19, 2020 at 6:53 AM Fantastic imagery dearest, Jenish! So realistically depicted! Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas March 19, 2020 at 11:48 AM Thank you Demetrios for your support..