Love In Barren Land

Love in barren land 





I sow my love in barren land
as tears water
blood manures
no buds bloom
inhumanity crawls,

Dust shadows the bright sky
dark clouds veil 
cries the blue 
and masked moonlight
hatred rips my soul,

There comes no twilight
no new sun rises
lost in absolute black
wailing through night
to erratic sleep's embrace,

I sow my love in barren land
and wait and wait
eyes end up in dryness
heartbeats regress
nothing to anticipate ...





Written April 21st, 2016
For "lyrics" poetry contest by rob carmack 
Inspired by song by Tomahawk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Awesome win, Dr....Linda
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Congrats on your placement, Dr. Upma. :)
Kimathi Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Greetings Dr. Upma. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Lawless Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. The opening line slaps the reader in the face and its repetition in the final stanza stuns him once again. Well done.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Thanks for ur insightful comments John..
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Sad and deep, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Thanks Sandra..
Carmack Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Dr Sharma, Andrea was right, I am impressed. Thank you and congrats!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Thanks rob.. so glad that I cud really impress you..
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:46 AM
great feeling of sadness in this one, Knowing Rob, I have a feeling he will be impressed by this one. I never know with Rob though. It will sure be fun to see his winners.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Thanks for having so much faith in this Andrea..
May Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 9:28 AM
A melancholy write Dr Upma...GL in the contest
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thanks Joseph..
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