Love Hurts

Love hurts like;
               porky pines needles, of 
                    A cactus bush... Ouch!!!
                                     That hurts.
     Stop poking me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Davis Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 5:14 PM
This is unique and creative. Imaginative and different. nice job
Grisetti Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:45 PM
a different portrayal of love, in a short, sweet package.
Sanderson Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 8:33 PM
"Thank You!!!"
Goff Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Original imaging Carma! Nice...jimbo
Sanderson Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 2:47 PM
" Thank You for taking the time to read. Carma"
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