Cory Long Poet Senryu

Love Hurts

His heart has been destroyed.
Struggles to find inner peace,
His heart has felt  pain.

Loves rough on a soul,
Uncertain with why love ends,
left standing alone.

Can he find the strength?
To repair the brokenness,
That leaves him hurting inside.

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Matt Hunt May 18, 2011 at 7:30 PM Very good job on this one Cory:) R.M.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 18, 2011 at 1:32 PM Nice expressions on love hurts. Please give once over to the syllable counts , cory

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2011 at 11:33 AM I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Cory. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts May 18, 2011 at 9:42 AM wonderful set of senryus Cory, much enjoyed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 18, 2011 at 9:10 AM the only way is to luv again cory.. this way your luv does not go to waste and heals the hurt of previous luv... awesome lines of emotional intensity my friend..