Becky Takacs Poet Free verse

Love Hurts

You tell me goodbye,
At the time I need you the most.
You walk out of the door,
The door of my life.

Bawling my eyes out,
For you to come back to me.
Laying there thinking,
If I should've done things differently.

Our flame has died,
The wax on the candle has been burnt,
No one can make it light again,
Except for you.

My heart falls to the floor,
In pieces.
Only you,
Can return my heart to its normal shape.

When you left,
I lost a part of me,
You were the person that,
I could turn to.

Now that your gone,
My heart is empty,
And is laying on the floor,
Waiting for you to pick it up.

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Steven Mcmorrow July 12, 2008 at 5:21 PM thats really good. and hey thanks for commenting on my stuff. keep writing, i like reading your stuff

Mickey Pig Knuckles July 11, 2008 at 10:36 PM Becky, I truly adore the emotional outpouring through your fine words of art. Its important for you to know that you have many friends to lean on and hopefully pull those smiles out of you to brighten everyones world. Sad but wonderful poem... MPK

James Foulk July 11, 2008 at 1:25 PM yes love hurts deep. but the hurt goes away after a time and a new love comes into our life. this was a well wrote poem. thank you becky for reading my poem and for your coment