Jenish Somadas Poet Jueju

Love Hug

Brush of lone moon paints her light
Hue of fair gold spreads dark night
Songs of sweet love drums my heart
When my true love hugs me tight.




Won second place in STRAND CHOICE J,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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John Watt March 18, 2020 at 2:14 PM Jenish, nice use of this short form. Love the romantic vibe. Congrats on your win ~ John Jenish Somadas March 18, 2020 at 10:20 PM Thank you John for your delightful comment..

Juliet Ligon March 17, 2020 at 10:36 AM Beautiful imagery of a hug. Jenish Somadas March 17, 2020 at 11:37 AM Thank you Juliet for your kind words..

Eve Roper March 17, 2020 at 12:44 AM Great imagery, Jenish, only the romance of the moon can strike an emotional feeling of love. Jenish Somadas March 17, 2020 at 1:25 AM Thank you Eve for that delightful comment..

Vijay Pandit March 16, 2020 at 7:31 AM Great emotion and imagery, Jenish. Jenish Somadas March 16, 2020 at 12:34 PM Thank you Vijay for the delightful comment...

Tom Cunningham March 16, 2020 at 3:45 AM It certainly makes you feel good, an uplifting feeling. Tom Jenish Somadas March 16, 2020 at 3:57 AM Thank you Tom for your support..