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Love Hug

Brush of lone moon paints her light Hue of fair gold spreads dark night Songs of sweet love drums my heart When my true love hugs me tight. Won second place in STRAND CHOICE J,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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John Watt

Date: 3/18/2020 2:14:00 PM

Jenish, nice use of this short form. Love the romantic vibe. Congrats on your win ~ John

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/18/2020 10:20:00 PM

Thank you John for your delightful comment..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/17/2020 10:36:00 AM

Beautiful imagery of a hug.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/17/2020 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Juliet for your kind words..

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2020 12:44:00 AM

Great imagery, Jenish, only the romance of the moon can strike an emotional feeling of love.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/17/2020 1:25:00 AM

Thank you Eve for that delightful comment..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/16/2020 7:31:00 AM

Great emotion and imagery, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/16/2020 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Vijay for the delightful comment...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2020 3:45:00 AM

It certainly makes you feel good, an uplifting feeling. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/16/2020 3:57:00 AM

Thank you Tom for your support..