Love Hate Relationship

Your beauty defies time
as you glide so effortlessly
across the boundless horizon

Breathless you capture my essence
and melt me from my frozen state
as the crackling embers spark nearby

My vision is blurred as if without end
crystal mounds begin to rise
and your effervescence illuminates the sky

Thoughts turn to a restless morning
where a painful path is purged
penetrating the virgin pure

If only these moment could survive
forever in child like eyes 
life would be devine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 7:58 PM
I would have commented earlier, but as I woke up today, I was hit in the head with a huge WHITE blanket of metaphors!!! This poem is perfection and a fav!
Murray Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 4:15 PM
So good to see you melting Tim.
Ball Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Beautiful Tim. I like the last line and totally agree. "If only these moments could last forever in child like eyes". Wonderful. A seven from me. God Bless and Merry Christmas. JB
Onclaud Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 1:00 PM
got me swooning again, tim... flow and glow!..huggs
Flats Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 12:09 PM
V2 my fave! Your words smooth the turn like high-dollar air suspension (sorry, car metaphor;-). Anyway, like it! ~ j
White Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:46 AM
I wish childlike eyes forever, being able to see new an wonder and amazement everywhere.
Godwin Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Divine flow of radiant and captivating imagery, Tim. A joy to read ... CayCay
Sands Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Follow your gut instinct Tim :)
Green Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Blurred or not you vision id seen through child like eyes and it seems to be so very beautiful as is your poem this morning Tim.
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