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Love Hate Relationship

Your beauty defies time as you glide so effortlessly across the boundless horizon Breathless you capture my essence and melt me from my frozen state as the crackling embers spark nearby My vision is blurred as if without end crystal mounds begin to rise and your effervescence illuminates the sky Thoughts turn to a restless morning where a painful path is purged penetrating the virgin pure If only these moment could survive forever in child like eyes life would be devine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/12/2016 7:58:00 PM
I would have commented earlier, but as I woke up today, I was hit in the head with a huge WHITE blanket of metaphors!!! This poem is perfection and a fav!
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:15:00 PM
So good to see you melting Tim.
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Date: 12/12/2016 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful Tim. I like the last line and totally agree. "If only these moments could last forever in child like eyes". Wonderful. A seven from me. God Bless and Merry Christmas. JB
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Date: 12/12/2016 1:00:00 PM
got me swooning again, tim... flow and glow!..huggs
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:09:00 PM
V2 my fave! Your words smooth the turn like high-dollar air suspension (sorry, car metaphor;-). Anyway, like it! ~ j
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Date: 12/12/2016 11:46:00 AM
I wish childlike eyes forever, being able to see new an wonder and amazement everywhere.
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Date: 12/12/2016 9:25:00 AM
Divine flow of radiant and captivating imagery, Tim. A joy to read ... CayCay
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Date: 12/12/2016 8:55:00 AM
Follow your gut instinct Tim :)
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Date: 12/12/2016 6:39:00 AM
Blurred or not you vision id seen through child like eyes and it seems to be so very beautiful as is your poem this morning Tim.
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