Mario De Paz Poet Haiku

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Dedicated to my wife

Love Has No Time

We long in the dark
Full of passion words of love
Fiftytwo years long.

So long time has passed
But love has never been sere.
Yet as the first time.

We are now aged,
The body youth has now gone.
But we still desire.




revisited to hold the 5-7-5 structure of HaiKu

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Debbie Duncan June 15, 2013 at 2:07 AM nicely done Mario ;}

Cecilia Macfarlane June 8, 2013 at 2:06 PM Love is ageless, wishing you another 52yrs....beautiful write! Hugs Mario De Paz June 9, 2013 at 10:19 AM Thanks for the wishes. I have a splendid wife to whom all my poems are dedicated.

Poet Tacito June 1, 2013 at 9:01 AM At the end of the day, that is all that will ever matter. This was terrific!

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2013 at 11:56 PM very nice, Mario, and thanks for checking out my poetry.