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Love Gone Wrong

We met and I fell, it was explosive Desire, lust, blazing through my veins You burned me up body and soul I was the only one though You used me, then went away What went wrong ? Am I broken ! Feelings are missing in what we had Communication, hopes, dreams, and most importantly love.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 9:56:00 PM

Hi Wendy, wish this was not the way you were left... sad to know one can take all that in a split second... enjoying your poetic ways, please write and post again. I posted a new poem called (HANDS) stop by and tell me what you think... Looking forward in seeing you around my poetry. love love~ & Hugs **LINDA

Roger Hadden

Date: 7/9/2013 8:35:00 AM

A very grand poem. Beautiful and it flows very well. Rogwer Dale Hadden.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 7/9/2013 7:58:00 AM

A sad reflection of what love can become. Well written and welcome to P/Soup.xx