Love Gone Wrong

We met and I fell, it was explosive
Desire, lust, blazing through my veins
You burned me up body and soul
I was the only one though
You used me, then went away
What went wrong ?
Am I broken !
Feelings are missing in what we had
Communication, hopes, dreams, and most importantly love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 23, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Hi Wendy, wish this was not the way you were left... sad to know one can take all that in a split second... enjoying your poetic ways, please write and post again. I posted a new poem called (HANDS) stop by and tell me what you think... Looking forward in seeing you around my poetry. love love~ & Hugs **LINDA
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July 9, 2013 at 8:35 AM
A very grand poem. Beautiful and it flows very well. Rogwer Dale Hadden.
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July 9, 2013 at 7:58 AM
A sad reflection of what love can become. Well written and welcome to P/Soup.xx
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