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Love Gone Wrong

Lover lover where do I begin? Laughing at your predicament. Seeing you crumble. Lover lover why are you there? Seeing you lying, breathing with no air. Do not dare to look at me with such despair. Lover lover what can I do? There is nothing I can do. Laughing at your self pity. Lover lover what is wrong? Do you seem to not like the handcuffs? Incredibly I do, seeing you there vulnerable. Lover Lover do you not see? You belong in the ground. That is were all lovers are found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/25/2013 9:49:00 PM
I likes this, kinda dark but I think it's the perfect way to describe the feelings of being hurt by your love.
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Date: 11/27/2012 8:51:00 AM
Good write much imagery. :) - edwaard
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