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Love Gone By

Remembrances of my beloved son and Old photos mounted on tears of time; Misty images of happy days gone by, Accuse me now of an unforgiving crime. Nevermore to be relived, Those moments of cherished bliss: If I could just one mistake have back, Could he forgive me my remiss?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/14/2018 11:08:00 PM
A very touching poem, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/15/2018 3:51:00 PM
Line, you keep outdoing yourself. This one is six months old already---although 'old' is perhaps a word better suited to me than to my poems... Thank you! ~ Gershon
Date: 2/17/2018 7:19:00 AM
A truly poignant and touching write Gershon. I'm sure he does and will always do - life is made up of mistakes which are really lessons in learning ...Maria
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:39:00 PM
You're so right, Maria...Sometimes, of course, the damage can't be done, no matter how well we've learned the lesson and mended our ways. This case, a true story, is one of those kind of lessons, unfortunately. Warm wishes! :-) Gershon
Date: 2/16/2018 7:07:00 PM
Oh Gershon, this heartbreak is expressed in such beautiful and powerful poignancy. Your emotional imagery resonates in the four chambers of my heart. Exquisitely tender and moving. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
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Date: 2/17/2018 8:37:00 PM
Thank you for your kind, kind words. I'm thrilled that it moved you, as that's what I've always felt poetry is supposed to do: Touch hearts and move people. Warm wishes to you! :-)
Date: 2/16/2018 6:31:00 AM
Touching poem Gershon..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/19/2018 3:14:00 PM
I don't know if you'll see this or not, but I accidentally deleted your comment on the poem, "Holy,"...I had replied, thanking you and saying that I really tried to keep that one historical, i.e., not 'politically charged,' and that I appreciated your noticing it. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/17/2018 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. It's a true story, unfortunately: One of those 'lessons' from which to learn---but the mistake of which can't be repaired...
Date: 2/15/2018 9:39:00 PM
Goosebumps. Powerful poem, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2018 1:22:00 AM
Appreciated! Thank you, my friend. I just wish that this poem was not a reflection of the truth in my life. Here's to lasting love, gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2018 1:22:00 AM
Appreciated! Thank you, my friend. I just wish that this poem was not a reflection of the truth in my life. Here's to lasting love, gw

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