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Love Given No Chance

I told you my feelings were strong. You told me the time was wrong. But for you, I do still long. There are so many things I’d like to say. But it never seems to be the right time of day. I weep, I cry, I wish I would have had the courage to just say goodbye. Every time I see you it hurts. The time I spend with you makes me feel like dirt. Every now and then you seem to flirt. You keep me so mystified. I just can’t seem to open my eyes You are still my biggest prize

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Date: 4/11/2017 5:05:00 AM
Such a lovely sad poem. Great flow. Welcome to Poetry Soup, from a fellow new UK member.
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Meghan Davitt
Date: 4/11/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you! Welcome to you too :)
Date: 4/10/2017 3:01:00 PM
Such a sad poem, that longing for love... The rhyme is great by the way, welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Meghan Davitt
Date: 4/10/2017 3:06:00 PM
Thank you :) Sometimes it is easier to write from the heart, even when it has been broken!

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