Love Gently Rocked

We sit, relaxed, at closing of the day,
you turn, a record on to softly play,
then place, fresh logs making our fire enhance,
and gently bow asking me for this dance.

The song, we’ve loved since we were very young,
so often danced with, and so often sung.
You sing, so sweetly in my longing ear,
and with, strong arms drawing me oh so near.

I place, my head upon your shoulder,
you spin, us around our humble room,
we laugh, just as when we were younger,
you stop, to kiss me; then we resume.

Such special times like this I feel my heart,
could never last if we should ever part.
Then shed, a tear by thoughts of losing you,
cause you’re, my one and only love so true.

Music stops; we stay together,
in loves embrace, we melt as one.
With fireplace, still gently burning,
our fire has only, just begun.



Per line:
Verses one two and four have ten syllables 
verse three has nine syllables 
Verse five has eight syllables 

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
12.12.2014
Contest: Rock me Rhythm Poems
Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:12 AM
Brenda, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Very romantic! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, Brenda ,such a beautiful romantic poem a 7. Blessings Eve miss you
Haight Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Brenda, stopping back with my congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Yours is quite romantic. Just in time for Valentine's Day. Congrats on your win.
Harper Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Brenda, lovely rocking poem, congratulations on your placement, thanks for entering my contest.
Aniagyei Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Love the melts, love that rhymes is Love that heals. Thank you Brenda!!!
Walker  Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Brenda, a beautiful poem enjoyed. Rated 7 - Verlena
Micuda Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Brenda, so lovely! Humble love is the best and truest kind, I feel.
Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:18 AM
so softly romantic Brenda great pen gl in contest hugs 7
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Shadow.
Yvonne Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Excellent job!I hope this does well for you in the contest.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Maurice.
Eastman Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Great write. Merry Christmas from the Eastman's, Dragon, Grandpa Troll, the kids and yes... even Hubby.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Carol.
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December 15, 2014 at 11:12 AM
I am gently rocked by the rhythm of romance! Well done, Brenda!! Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:09 PM
Thanks so much Rhonda.
Meade Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Wow, I feel the heat on this one -- fire love!! Outstanding my dear friend. You are the best.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Thank you so much David.
Chircop Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 3:28 PM
So beautiful and warm.this is ,just like your heart sweet lady !Charma
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 3:58 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine.
Smith Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Simply beautiful Brenda...hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Tim.
Haight Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Wow, Brenda...simply beautiful and so romantic. This will do extremely well in the contest! 7+Fav...Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:29 PM
I hope it does Sandra. Thank you so much for your kind support.
Manassian Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Well, aren't you amazing, Brenda. Yes...It rocked me too...gentle, smoothly, and oh so beautiful. Hugs...May the love last and last.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Eileen.
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:46 AM
so beautiful and romantic Brenda - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Jan. XOXO
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Wow Brenda i' m impressed dear friend! Very beautiful and lovingly romantic! A 7 for you! I really hoped you enjoyed the dance. Very cozy looked indeed. :) Have a lovely Sunday! Good luck in contest! Love and hugs! Xxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Thank you so much Dorian.
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December 14, 2014 at 8:01 AM
such touching sweet write Brenda.. :)! wow! I wish I could have someone whom I can have such moments with.. :)! Happy Holidays.. :)!
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