Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Love Forever

Love forever




         In my dreams you always will remain alive,
            Passionate longings shall also thrive,
                 As I take a deep last breath,
                      Blossoming Aldreth,
                          Flashes fast,
                               Death,
                         Leaves aghast,
                    Tranquillise the wrath,
               Remember Shakespeare's Mcbeth,
                Where till eternity souls survive,
         In my dreams you always will remain alive !






Written Feb 17th, 2015
For Andrea's contest

Awarded 5th place win

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Dr. Vandana Sharma March 7, 2015 at 1:04 AM Enchanting world of dreams..........lovely!!

Skat A February 27, 2015 at 11:10 PM Nice win. SKAT

Eve Roper February 24, 2015 at 8:18 PM Wonderful write, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, a 7 congratulations on your win. Blessings

Sandra Haight February 23, 2015 at 6:54 PM Such a nice "love forever" poem, written in such a difficult form, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:59 AM Thanks a lot Sandra!

Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 8:12 AM Great write, congratulations! Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:58 AM Thanks for ur kind visit and words Richard!

Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:44 AM Oh so nicely done! Unique and beautiful, grats on your win~ Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:57 AM Thnx for ur kind visit n words Casarah!

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 2:03 AM beautifully penned - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:56 AM Thnx a lot Jan !

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 12:30 AM Dr. Upma. Are you from England? I was thinking whoever wrote this one would have to be an English lover of Shakespeare! I even looked up Aldreth to see what it was. Does it have some importance to Shakespeare? This was a most interesting poem! Congrats for your win in my contest. Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:55 AM Glad that u liked Andrea! I am from India my dear,, It just occured to me n i used that for rhyming,, certainly I m a great fan of Shakespeare ! Appreciate your words of encouragement,, thanks //upma//

Frederic Parker February 17, 2015 at 6:54 PM Isn't that the way of love..always alive in our dreams..should do well good luck Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 18, 2015 at 4:02 AM Appreciate your visit Frederic,, thanks a lot!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 17, 2015 at 11:04 AM Great write Upma. Love Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 18, 2015 at 4:01 AM Thanks Rajat !