Love For Sale

Midnight's hollow streets Rolls Royce crushes cigarette butts Sinful, cold drizzle of animalistic desire Lurks on shadowy corners of locked buildings For a price, negotiable.. Balconies bear yesterday's broken beads A jazz musician is soundly asleep So much hard numbness in those easy to open bottles... It rains over useless signs: Do Not Park On Bridge! Skid marks end in despair A street light dies totally alone The City keeps on pulsating hopes of togetherness In a Midnight's hollow streets Full of happy windows...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 2:29 PM
this is a very moving, deep, and intense write. The imagery pulls the reader inside your words. nice job
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November 6, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Congrats on the featured poem, "Love For Sale." Vince
Brown Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations Iolanda on your well deserving poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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October 30, 2011 at 3:58 PM
If you ever read the Bible check out Hebrews 13:5 "I will never leave you nor forsake you" ...a ray of sunshine in our world that you described so thoroughly :)
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October 30, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Iolanda, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween week,..p.d.
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October 30, 2011 at 12:14 PM
I am glad your poem was featured, otherwise I would not have come across your work. Good job, Jolanda. It was brilliantly written :)
Ace Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 4:02 AM
A time hidden by darkness of night and yet..... the picture you paint through the use of your words is very descriptive; beautiful imagery.
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January 17, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Love the imagery in this piece. Well done. Thank you for your kind comments on my blog today. Smiles from Lolita
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January 15, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Interesting, very realistic and well worded write that depicts well life on the street. Enjoyed reading your work, Yolanda. Thanks for sharing and thank you for reading my poem and the nice comments. Best wishes, Caroline.
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January 15, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Great write Iolanda! Great imagery! Driving by in a car, through all big cities, funny how all such streets look the same and have that vibe on a cold rainy night! Good job! Peace and love, Audrey
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January 15, 2010 at 4:00 AM
Iolanda, This poem is intense. The imagery is great. You have handled a difficult theme extremely well. It reminds me of Bourbon street. Every aspect covered. Excellent write. (And thanks for commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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