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Love Falls Like Water

love falls like water our time on earth a whirlpool - the circle of life Inspired by John Freeman's Poetry Contest: "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:37:00 PM

you give haiku the best looking attitude ...skat

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2012 7:51:00 AM

love it when you philosophize, love this

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2012 9:51:00 PM

I noticed you where on the soup, after I posted my blogs. Thanks for the comments on my blogs. It's always nice to give support. I noticed that you commented a few poets. like Yesha* she is only 2 names right under my new poem. I was wondering why you skipped my poem. I know U tired. I was thinking maybe you did not understand my poem. I did use hardcore thoughts..I'm actually mad and sad with Nathan.. than is why i wrote that poem. I was just wondering. It is not like you to skip my new post.

James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2011 8:48:00 AM

Fine Haiku Andrea. Sometimes it would be a joy to escape the whirlpool every so often. Many congratulations on your win in the contest of John's :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/15/2011 5:40:00 PM

A nice creative piece you penned here Andrea. Lot of reading to catch up on. love phyl

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/12/2011 3:44:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest andrea, great precept haiku, we both mentioned whirlpools!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 6:46:00 AM

boo! Lol... ho Andrea, and yes Nate returned back to Oregon. I had a blast with him. We actually did lots this time around. And taking him to our ugly Gulf, was a must..lol... anyways stopping by to say hi.... and read a few poems,,, take care,..p.d.

Edwin Baldwin

Date: 7/10/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea!!! The proverbial circle of life, never knowing its beginning nor its end quite like a whirlpool, and all the while through our confusion love is raining down upon us. Outstanding haiku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 12:04:00 PM

Creative work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2011 10:30:00 PM

love this, heartie! swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 9:05:00 PM

superb write...CONGRATULATIONS! *-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 3:45:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty my friend..oh wow enjoy.. beach fun today .. Venus having such a ball...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Andrea in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 7/9/2011 11:56:00 AM

Very nicely done Carol-It paints a great pictue! Congrats to you :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2011 10:48:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on your win...yes the last line of your and George Aul's Haiku is exactly same..seems to be in the same wave~~~length:)

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 9:18:00 AM

Andrea. Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:13:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2011 8:57:00 AM

Many congrats, Andrea : )

Rachelle S.

Date: 7/9/2011 1:27:00 AM

like the figurative language, very deep :)

Rick Parise

Date: 7/8/2011 8:57:00 PM

Blessing on this peaceful eve.

Rick Parise

Date: 7/8/2011 8:56:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea~ I quess I'm "KIND" of a medium..........can't wait to see your entry....I haven't written a piece for this contest yet....I'm trying to stay true to form with the requirements....

George Aul

Date: 7/8/2011 10:10:00 AM

Hey, the scarier thought is that both of us submitted our Haiku's within hours of each other (mine first). So does that mean we have ESP between us? I know what your thinking takes on a whole new meaning, doesn't it?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 7:10:00 AM

Just had to stop by today and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Andrea. I will be back soon to read more of your poetry. By the way no I have never gotten another doggie since I lost those last two. They live a long time and really grieve when they lose a love one and as I have no idea how many years I have left here on earth I don't want to leave another here to grieve. I hope you understand my feelings. Love, Carol

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/4/2011 10:24:00 AM

I have been Haiku-ing it up sister! We have REEAAALLLY been working with the kids on Haiku. They love to ring the little bell after the 17th sylllables. I can see them ringing the triangle after this nice poem! I will share it if you permit! We are doing a Towne Square Poetry Reading tonight, just before the fireworks!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 7/3/2011 2:14:00 PM

Oh fabulous Andrea want to say you are a very sweet friend cause you always take your time to read and send me wonderful congrats and comments so thank you very much friend.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa