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As I run, gasping for air I have run so far to just give up right now, inhaled n kept on pushing 
my body to death because its all no mre and nothing left so wht the Hell right ? As I see the 
heli pass by me bright light , I raise my thumbs up to thnk him, now I have a clear view n can 
ran safer , I give less to the cop cars yelling at me ,"stop, dnt make this any worse for u son," 
son? Triggered my body for I hate tht , just turned my head n have a big grin , didn't help my 
case but I caRed less at this point.
Jump a fence to take a flower the throne in my body made me feel so good , no time got to 
run, yellow rose mixed with the red of my blood in blend so well it looked natural, my body I 
feel it , please dnt just alittle mre please n it well be over soon, I see as I rushed n opend the 
door she was right there sleeping I laid it next to her , kissd her check, tired weak n just plain 
dead , shock off head high , n chest puffed up walked out, mre Thn a dozen cop car n a hali, 
as dog came at me I did the sAme I ran towards it but to my surprise as I saw light  5 dogs I 
didn't hesitate n Hell make my last fight worth it .

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Date: 3/26/2011 3:42:00 PM
This is my first time visiting your poetry and I'm really glad I did, I've been going through a rough time lately and the poets writing on here is the only thing really keeping my spirits high anymore... I was wondering if you could look at my latest poem and maybe give me some advice.. I need all the advice I can get...
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Date: 3/18/2011 9:06:00 AM
All leading to a last fight. A passionate write. Congrats on the HM
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:56:00 AM
Great write, Felipe! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations Felipe on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:54:00 PM
Congrats Felipe on your HM in the Maverick Free Verse contest luv.. an exciting entry .. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of john, felipe
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:33:00 PM
Felipe, Congrtulations on your success with FM. Agape, Moses
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